You lie
on sheets of white.
I lie
inside your lines;
strokes of truth
curled together,
embraced
in secrets
unwritten.
You lie
on sheets of white.
I lie
inside your lines;
strokes of truth
curled together,
embraced
in secrets
unwritten.
Great poem!
I appreciate the simplicity of this piece very much.
this is so amazing. I love your writing. It is pure, vulnerable and full of truth.
You say so much with so few words. Absolutely beautiful.
Very sharp! I loved this; thanks for sharing
Oooohh!
Great poem… wow.
Tight, yet full of sigh-inducing thought and image. Wish I could do that.
xox
wow, Kellie, that blew me a way. it really told a story!!!! good job
Thank you, Terry. I always appreciate your encouraging words. xox
always my pleasure to read what you write